WK 9 - Notes from Trial Presentation Crit

  • Scale - trays presented in different space 
  • Interruption 
  • Separation 
  • colour > environment > removing the blue / green > bodily 
  • Distill not melting 
  • Corruption > rust 
  • Intense abrupt sound > zoomed in 
  • Waiting for more to happen 
  • Water content in body 
  • Suggestion of blindfold is enough to make people close their eyes 
  • Echoic memory from sound in foyer 
  • > Takes on another form 
  • > Transition of memory 
  • Try presenting in different rooms
  • Ice melting reinforced by melting 
  • Range of components comes back to the process of Melting ice 
  • If shows coloured ice in the process of melting, and the aftermath of that. 
  • Photographs - beautiful images 
  • Photographs or prints ?
  • Play on states of time / being 
  • Melting sped up 
  • Photographs frozen in time 
  • Byproduct of the freezing process real time state 
  • Audio durational 
  • Trays of ice don’t speak to the fluidity of the photographs 
  • Does everything need to be there 
  • It works because they’re together 
  • It could become a research exercise 
  • Distinct sensibility that is beautiful 
  • SPACE - containers of ink, dispersed in the space 
  • You see everything together 
  • A show packed in together 
  • Colour photo processing
  • Sun prints 
  • SCALE - Shocked to see they were so small, to make incredible images 
  • Separate rooms 
  • Encounter oversized version first, then reveal the smaller ?
  • Encounter sound first, need images to understand the sound - disruption of sound and vision 
  • Colour is bodily, specimens, cellular, about the body 
  • Carefully chosen - colour and time 
  • Splinted, atoms, microscopic 
  • Growth, biological, tumours (pretty)
  • Biology 
  • Jellies that you grow mould on 
  • Colour - melting ice = environmental concerns, blue / green, absence of the blue and green dialogs with signify by showing it’s absence. Signifying human 
  • Distill - berries, pink salt, alcohol 
  • Not linked to climate change 
  • Open 
  • Ways this could be directed more purposefully towards a certain reading 
  • We want to think about environment   
  • Bodily, bruised, cellular, 
  • Overhead satelite shots 
  • Violent to the body / no violent 
  • Tissue 
  • Rust 
  • Sound - really aggressive and violent, couldn’t listen > intense sound 
  • Zoomed in 
  • Blind folds suggest that you should focus on hearing 
  • - All about vision when you enter the room. 
  • - So much of the body is made up of water 
  • Blindfold on the wall - I’m not doing that…. 
  • Blindfold is suggestion 
  • Reliant on the sound. 
  • Incorporating the sense of self with the echoic memory of the sound 
  • Not encased by sound, you have to rely on memory 
  • - Transition of memory 
  • - A move between things which is perhaps defeated 
  • Hedging of bets 
  • - This is the work deal with it. 
  • - Visually told, what the work is. 
  • - Projection is dominant 
  • - Do the photographs do anything else?? 
  • - Raspberries / medicine / blood 
  • Hyper- real - stop motion 
  • Juice of particular berries, water of particular place 
  • Title is important - distill possibly to open? 
  • Hard to disassociate 
  • Painting, colour photography 
  • - Listening environment that’s purely listening 
  • - SCALE - projections of every wall.